Improving my grammar... (help!)

[SeekerOfPeace]

Hello!

I've lived in China for a while (Sichuan to be exact).

I would like to improve my written Chinese. My Chinese friend has told me it's not very good.

That's fine as I've only just started really putting my mind into it, but I do want to improve.

I'm back home right now so I'm limited to learning new vocab words.

I would really really (really!) appreciate if someone could read my mandarin and help me out with my grammar.

I can speak it ok, but writing is a whole different story and I feel ready to get at it.

I'm willing to help out in any way I can in return (I speak fluent french as well in case someone would be interested in me helping in return).

Well, if anyone is interested, I would like to start as soon as possible.

Thanks for reading!

SoP.

[zhangan_mac]

Hello!

I've lived in China for a while (Sichuan to be exact).

I would like to improve my written Chinese. My Chinese friend has told me it's not very good.

That's fine as I've only just started really putting my mind into it, but I do want to improve.

I'm back home right now so I'm limited to learning new vocab words.

I would really really (really!) appreciate if someone could read my mandarin and help me out with my grammar.

I can speak it ok, but writing is a whole different story and I feel ready to get at it.

I'm willing to help out in any way I can in return (I speak fluent french as well in case someone would be interested in me helping in return).

Well, if anyone is interested, I would like to start as soon as possible.

Thanks for reading!

SoP.

nice to meet u . my msn is zhangan@beiwaionline.com . i am a network administrator at www.beiwaionline.com .I wish we can communicatewith each other not only in chinese but also in english.
很高兴在这里碰到你. 我的msn是 zhangan@beiwaionline.com.我www.beiwaionline.com的一名网络管理员,我希望我们以后能用中英文同时交流

[SeekerOfPeace]

Hello!

Pleased to meet you.

Yes, of course, we can also communicate in English.

I've checked your web site but I must admit I can't quite decipher everything.

Could you PM (private message) me your e-mail address?

I do not have MSN messenger I'm afraid.

I also prefer communication through e-mail as it gives me time to think things through when I write in mandarin.

I will check your website further and hope we can start talking to each other soon.

SoP.